Your poem, Robert, offers an orderly arrangement, describing the speaker's work boxed in quatrains. The final stanza with six lines…
Robert, you have penned an evocative work. I am pleased that you chose blank verse. The practical side of me…
Rachel, What a wonderful poem. Would you consider granting permission for it to be used as text for a choral…
Your poem, Robert, offers an orderly arrangement, describing the speaker's work boxed in quatrains. The final stanza with six lines…
Thank you, Luke, for your evaluation and for your courteous suggestion.
Robert, you have penned an evocative work. I am pleased that you chose blank verse. The practical side of me…
Rachel, What a wonderful poem. Would you consider granting permission for it to be used as text for a choral…
And possessive apostrophe for mother's too.