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Home Poetry Beauty

‘Gazing above Daily Cares’ by Daniel Magdalen

August 4, 2017
in Beauty, Poetry, Villanelle
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A Villanelle

To breathe the beaming silence of the sky
I long, when dawn’s chill wakes my eyes, and see
The oft-unseen yet boundless peace on high.

When slumber’s velvety dim moments die,
Pale crowds rush back and forth, although unfree
To breathe the beaming silence of the sky;

For fading shapes of smoke they crave and sigh –
The instant’s captives, whose relief can’t be
The oft-unseen yet boundless peace on high.

New straying steps, atop the old, pass by,
Away from hearts’ forgotten goal – the key
To breathe the beaming silence of the sky…

Though I must bear the bustle’s dust, I try
To reach beyond this breath and draw to me
The oft-unseen yet boundless peace on high.

While many vie to live and live to vie
For empty gains, a life reaps joy when free
To breathe the beaming silence of the sky,
The oft-unseen yet boundless peace on high.

 

Daniel Magdalen is a doctoral student in the Faculty of Letters at the University of Bucharest, in Romania.

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Comments 10

  1. Satyananda Sarangi says:
    8 years ago

    Dear Daniel, greetings.
    I loved the refrain that you used. The fact that ‘villanelle’ as a form is difficult to execute, I would like to congratulate you.
    More power to your pen. Best wishes.

    Reply
    • Daniel Magdalen says:
      8 years ago

      Dear Satyananda,
      I am glad you like this villanelle and want to thank you for your appreciative comment.
      Best wishes,
      Daniel Magdalen

      Reply
  2. Morgan Downs says:
    8 years ago

    This might be the best poem I’ve read on this site. Well done, I hope you have more.

    Reply
    • Daniel Magdalen says:
      8 years ago

      Thank you very much. Still, there certainly are poems more complex and beautiful, on this site, waiting to be discovered. Indeed, I shall be writing some more texts when the time is right.

      Reply
  3. Amy Foreman says:
    8 years ago

    Excellent poem, Daniel. Loved every word! I also would love to read more of your poetry!

    Reply
    • Daniel Magdalen says:
      8 years ago

      I am thankful for your appreciation and, yes, new texts are surely to be submitted soon.

      Reply
  4. Hibah Shabkhez says:
    8 years ago

    This is just lovely. 🙂

    Reply
    • Daniel Magdalen says:
      8 years ago

      I am glad you enjoyed it.

      Reply
  5. Father Richard Libby says:
    8 years ago

    Congratulations, Mr. Magdalen. This is very nice work.

    Reply
    • Daniel Magdalen says:
      8 years ago

      Thank you very much, Mr. Libby. I appreciate these kind words.

      Reply

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