The Last Voyage of Barnaby Bear
When first the winter twilight dimmed the pane
And rain beat softly on the nursery wall,
I spread a blanket like a royal train
Along my shoulders at adventure’s call.
My bed became a ship beneath full sail,
Its wooden posts rose tall as masts to me.
And shadows cast upon the moonlit veil
Were distant islands scattered among the sea.
My faithful Barnaby stood at my side,
A weathered bear of venerable years
Whose tawny coat (though threadbare) still supplied
A captain comfort through his doubts and fears.
He wore a blue ribbon withered with age,
Yet in my eyes no admiral could compare;
The wisest mariner to tread a stage
Of tossing decks was surely Barnaby Bear.
We sailed through waters dark as polished glass,
Past reefs of books and vast mountains of quilts,
Where monstrous whales of cloud were seen to pass
Far above the foam imagination built.
The wind sang loudly through the chamber door
While floorboards groaned like timbers strained from sea—
Every creak this old house gave became a
Tall tale of distant ports and mysteries.
But from the east—alas!—there came a cry:
A rival pirate vessel hove in sight!
Its sable banner black against the sky
With lanterns gleaming red within the night.
A fleet of rogues approached our gallant bark
To seize our fortunes and wealth we had won;
Their captain’s golden tooth flashed in the dark
(A villain, surely, if ever there was one!)
Then Barnaby stepped forward without fear.
“Stand fast!” he cried, though none but I could hear.
So our crew stood firm as the foe drew near—
The hour of reckoning was plainly here!
We loosed the cannons fashioned from young dreams,
Their volleys shook the ocean to its floor;
Bright lightning flashed—or so at least it seemed—
As cushions flew and struck from shore to shore.
The battle raged until the moon rode high,
When scuffs marked our deck and their sail half-mast.
Now our rivals turned trembling round to fly,
Their vaunted triumph foundered at the last!
Three ringing cheers arose from every hand
And dear Barnaby received victor’s praise—
No knight returning safely to the land
Was hailed more loudly in the olden days.
Then came the feast—we gathered by the mast
And raised mugs of grey grog in triumph there.
The storm was gone, the danger now was past,
And peaceful silence settled everywhere.
But soon I saw beneath the lantern’s light
The mug was only painted tin, not gold;
The mast a bedpost standing plain in sight
And the sea a quilt against evening’s cold.
Fellow pirates faded with the fire
And distant islands vanished one by one.
My mighty ship retired from its empire,
Its voyages and victories now done.
And Barnaby—whose deeds were sung so grand—
Was once again a bear beside my bed.
Yet somehow neither of us felt unmanned
By all the splendid falsehoods we had led.
For cares beyond our nursery had not come,
Nor years that teach the heart to count its cost.
No grief had yet appeared upon the horizon.
No cherished thing had been wholly lost.
Our world was wide and every humble room
Could hold an ocean, if one wished it so.
And all tomorrows bloomed without a gloom,
Like winds that fill a sail and bid it go.
I sometimes think back to that grand night—
How rich we were despite our modest store!
A blanket cape could make a captain bright,
And faithful bears could be commodores.
And though those seas existed only then
Within young child’s untroubled realm of play,
Their freedom seems more precious now than when
We sailed them, never dreaming they’d decay.
Tashvi Reddy is a rising senior attending Deerfield Academy in Deerfield, Massachusetts. She is a published children’s book author.










This is a beautiful poem, Tashvi, so imaginative and well written. I can already see the book that may accompany it some day.
“And all tomorrows bloomed without a gloom.” Lovely story, Tashvi, recalled and told with a fine meditation on childhood imagination that isn’t just added on, but forms an appropriate closure. I chose this line (among many good ones suitable to quote) because it demonstrates your skill in meter. Ordinary conversation would say “without gloom” because gloom is rarely a countable thing. But when you add the “a” between two stressed syllables, we hear a regular five-stress line. There are some other lines in this poem you could probably improve metrically–if it suits what you want to say. For example, I’d suggest “He wore a ribbon blue but pale with age” rather than your “He wore a blue ribbon withered with age” (where there are only four stresses instead of the usual five).
Keep on rising to narrate such stories! I very much enjoyed your “American Road Trip” in the Great American Competition. Congratulations on being a finalist in your category.
Tasvi,
but true dreams never do decay..
The poem gives a beautiful presentation of why myths are vital but leaves the reader with a feeling that decay is inevitable and that when you grow up you inevitably leave all behind.
Read C.S Lewis, Chesterton and Tolkien to know that the nursey myth is necessary but not sufficient.
That the kind of cynicism,
which is cultivated now in our culture as a synthetic substitute for wisdom,
is deadly,
and that a fully mature mind reaches for the beauty of true myth as the ship in which to sail on the greatest Odyssey of all; the quest for Faith in our Creator, Hope and Charity,
warmest regards,
Karen in Cambridge
Dear Tashi,
true dreams never do decay..
C.S Lewis, Chesterton and Tolkien are such inspiring writers because they affirm this truth and of the fact that a love of myth is vital for the true philosopher.
Cynicism which is our culture’s synthetic substitute for wisdom, is deadly..
A fully mature mind reaches for the beauty of true myth as the ship in which to sail
on the greatest Odessy of all; the quest for Faith in our Creator, Hope and Charity ..
warmest regards,
Karen
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I truly enjoyed this, Tashvi! I could see reading this from an anthology book of poems from the fifties! Those last two stanza are sentimental in the best meaning of the word.
There was only one place were I felt pulled out of the magic of the poem for even an instant and that was this line “We loosed the cannons fashioned from young dreams,” which took me out of the battle that you perfectly placed us in.
You must be very proud of such a work! Great storytelling!
Tashvi, you are an inspiring revelation. How beautifully your poem is structured in rhyme, rhythm, message, and flow from verse to verse of logical progression and reminiscence. Your telling of the story took me back to a song sung by Peter, Paul, and Mary of “Puff the Magic Dragon.”
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