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All Hallow’s Eve will soon be here—
A time when our two worlds come near.
They roam our world for just one night—
And you may fear until it’s light.
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K.M. Hayes is a freelance writer from Gainesville, FL.
Fine work, Adam. You really do need to get into Chinese sounds, characters, and even tones to counteract whatever remains…
Lines 11 and 12 do need heavy revision. I would suggest the following, as a way to tighten them up:…
Norman, I very much like the concept of your sonnet, moving from classical masks to the rough equivalent in cyberreality.…
Norman, I like your rhymes, particularly the ending with "odious" and "Janus." Your subject and message are well thought out…
C.B., You have a way of getting to the heart of human nature with a raw honesty that makes me…
All through the ages the moon has been an object of curiosity and well respected. Thanks for reminding us.
An eerie poetic intro to a night of fright. BOO!
Perfect quatrain, Kevin, with each line contributing a new and profound idea to the whole. The last line seems “light,” but keeps up the mystery by its seemingly trivial permission to fear.
Three qualified nurses can’t be wrong, but you, Kevin, could have done better.
I’m a doctor, coach.
It’s short, spooky, and good, Kevin.