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Till rolling seas cease heaving high,
The starry nights stop passing by,
The universe is wrapped in flame,
And there is no one left to blame.
__Until then? … You’re my loved one.
Till sun no longer makes a day,
And earth will never get a ray,
The quiet coldness of the earth
Bespeaks a lonely universe.
__Until then? … I’m still not done.
Though worlds may die and silent be,
We still have an eternity
To be together, on and on.
The words like death and dying gone.
__Until then? … We’ve just begun.
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Roy E. Peterson is a writer and former U.S. military army intelligence officer who currently resides in Texas.
Love persistent through gloomy apocalypse–until the veil is lifted in the final stanza, and unsuspected potential revealed. Succinct and well done, Roy.
I appreciate your kind comments, Margaret!
Roy~ such touching sentiments in exquisite form and style. I feel as you have so aptly written;
” we’ve only just begun…”
Happy Valentine’s Day?
Wonderful thoughts, Panagoita! Deeply appreciated!
That’s beautiful and romantic. I especially like that you got the blame game out of the way right in the first stanza. The length is really good too, great job!
I am thankful for your noticing the important things. Sometimes I just have to stop writing more verses and realize what I have is that which I wished to communicate already.
This poem, Roy, to me sounded almost like a hymn, and the multiversal refrain at the end of each stanza was a very nice touch. This is the “other side” of military intelligence.
I had to smile at your comment about military intelligence. Thank you for your wonderful evaluation. I always appreciate reading your thoughts and poetry.
Roy, whoever said romance was dead hadn’t had the pleasure of reading your poem. I agree with C.B. on the refrain front. Thank you very much for this Valentine’s Day treat.
Bless you for your kind words and encouragement. I appreciated your Valentine’s Day contribution, as well! Your poems are always well thought out and superbly well written.
This is a beautiful poem! I especially like the line “the quiet coldness of the earth.”