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Emergence
A child within the chrysalis,
__awaiting to emerge.
__Fruition and desire,
__hoping to converge.
The years prove long and arduous
__and obstacles demanding,
__with journeys full of strife
__and lessons notwithstanding.
Despite the labyrinth of thorns,
__the roses always bloom.
__And golden days prevail
__amongst the gray and gloom.
And dreams become realities,
__and darkness turns to light.
__For life in its complexities,
__is worthy of the plight.
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Venessa Lee-Estevez has been an educator for Miami-Dade County Public Schools in Florida for over 21
years.
A beautiful poem and picture! Thank you both.
Thank you very much for your kind words!
Precious poem!
Thank you very much for your kind words!
Written like an educator who has seen many children grow into themselves, no doubt.
A lovely poem that paints a powerful picture!
Indeed I have! They definitely inspire me to be a better person.
A compellingly beautiful vision of metamorphosis.
Thanks for the read, Venessa.
Thank you so much! These words were inspired by my students.
This is a nice little gem of poetry, carefully constructed and polished.
A very good touch is in the penultimate line, where the poet switches to tetrameter. This adds a touch of emphasis to the sad words that run through the piece (arduous, demanding, strife, thorns, gloom, darkness) by finally gathering them all up as a part of life’s “complexities.”
I really appreciate your analysis. I definitely chose my words carefully in order to illustrate the contrasting images. Thank you!
That “hoping to converge” and “worth of the plight” – feels like the beginning and ending of your poem perfectly complement each other! This is beautifully and concisely put – I might just memorize it 🙂
I appreciate your compliments. We all start our lives with hopes and dreams, but we also face many challenges. I was inspired by my students because I wanted them to understand that all of the challenges that they will face essentially help us to grow as human beings.
Beautifully developed, Venessa. The possibility in the first stanza, the difficulties in the second, promise for the future in the third, and worthy growth completed in the last.
Thank you very much! Life is what we make it. All of the trials and tribulations are part of a great journey.
A strong and beautiful piece created with remarkable precision: beginning the poem with the chrysalis reference to convey the coming of a new life, talking about the tough times to come, and ending it with a timeless message. Thank you for this carefully executed piece, Venessa. I enjoyed it thoroughly.
Thank you for your positive and encouraging response! I am glad that you enjoyed it.