I love the picture painted by these two narratives. They remind me of the hymn "How Can I Keep from…

Thanks, Roy, You've hit the nail on the head; my poem is like a song! I modeled Summer's End on…

Margaret - Your gift of wisdom and insight is certainly appreciated and heard. :) I love that you reached past…

Thanks Paul, That is exactly the image I intended. This poem is the first successful attempt, though it is certainly…

Thank you, JD, I used quotation marks to distinguish between the characters and the narrator. I thought it would be…