Today
Awake, and do not fade away
into your gloom—and stay within
your room. Instead, without delay,
compel yourself to a wide grin,
and slowly some joy will sink in,
as you’ll allow yourself to think
of how much worse it could have been—
the tumble downward from the drink,
how much lower there was to sink
(i.e. deceased inside a grave
to never wake and once more blink).
As you recuperate, you’ll crave
the life lived by the knave, behave!
Don’t let yourself be habit’s prey.
Today—each day—you’ll need to pave
the road toward your finest days.
In Need of a Hand
Assist me please, O brother mine,
the times have not been kind to me;
got fired from the assembly line,
which sadly I did not foresee.
My kids must eat, in total three
of them. I do not want to lurk
and frequently chime with a plea
to each man that I’ll see—I’ll work.
And do not think that I will shirk
from my responsibilities.
Please, I do not want to irk;
let me pledge my abilities
working at your facilities.
Allow my kids once more to dine.
You’ll like my capabilities,
if not, I swear I will resign.
Poet’s Note: The above poems are tetraquartets, a form I invented. Below are its parameters:
4 iambic feet per line (iambic tetrameter).
4 lines per stanza (quatrains).
4 quatrains total.
4 interlocking rhymes, organized thus: abab / bcbc / cdcd / dada
Paul Millan currently resides in Glendora, California. His work has appeared on Lighten-Up Online, and will appear in Westward Quarterly.








Thanks Paul,
“Today” was just the message I needed to start my day today.
I’m glad to hear M.D.
Thanks for reading.
Good ones, Paul. The first made me think of my husband who
has a habit of smiling.
That’s a good habit to have JD. I’m glad it made you think of your husband. Thanks for reading.
Paul, two melancholy poems on such sad subjects but with a sense of hope in both. I like your tetraquartet formula. I have my own formula I invented and am thinking of sending to SCP. This encouraged me to point out the specifications.
You definitely should, Roy. That way maybe someone tries to do one and it can be another form for all formalists to use. Thank you for reading.
A fascinating form, highlighting a sobering (pub intended) content….Tnx
Thanks a lot for reading it, Golan.
Good new form, Paul. Well named, and very well used for the subject of “Today,” with suitable beginning, and an ending line that slightly varies the rhyme sound to indicate a change for the future.
While “Today” seems like internal encouragement, the direct address “In Need of a Hand” forthrightly moves outward. The two poems make an appropriate pair.
I’m glad you liked the form, Margaret and that you find it aptly named. It took me a bit to think of a fitting name. Thanks for reading and your analysis of my poems. Have a good week!
‘Don’t let yourself be habit’s prey.’ It’s a bit late in the day, but I’m getting there.
I found ‘Today’ an affirming poem, whereas ‘In Need of a Hand’ reasserts my feeling that we’re losing our compassion for our fellow human beings.
I like the format, Paul.
I love this tricksy new form, and I love how the emergent ideas bump into and slide against each other like the cohorts of an ovoviviparous brood.